Hey guys, here you go its ch20 ^^ right before Eve of Christmas.
The staff and I are heading on our break now hehe. and hope that people will decide to help out with the next course of releases.
As far as i know i am hoping this is clear of typos and all if not let us know nicely.
Also Merry Christmas all ch20.Update: to those of you who wanted a second link...here is hotfile xd.
9 comments:
Thanks for your work and the speed of the releases ^^
THANK YOU SO MUCH
I checked the site everyday since the last chapter release and now i cant wait for the next one.
Thanks alot and great job and keep it up
Use another free file host this one isn't working!
Message:
"We are sorry, but all downloading slots for your country are busy."
Thanks for the chapter and have a Merry Christmas!
Super proofer powers, GOOO!!!!
-Page three, bottom-middle panel, first bubble: You missed a comma before the last word. "...same state as you, right?"
-Page ten, middle panel, last two bubbles: Don't need the comma, you forgot the period, and company should be capitalized.
-Page thirteen, last panel, first part on first bubble: Doesn't need the comma.
-Page twenty two, bottom-middle panel, bottom bubble: The "i" in "I'll" is not capitalized! For shame!
-Page twenty three, bottom-right panel, both bubbles: You don't capitalize after commas.
Well, you guys DID ask... so I obliged. It's nothing that'll mess up the story, so there is no need for a revision. I'm just a nit picker ^_^
Bossss. Cheerss.
to Chore Boy:
haha, yeah i don't really care for those mistakes and I am sure that most of the other readers don't mind at all. That is unless I get a huge spam about this haha, which will probably mean that the readers want proper punctuation hehe.
@ chomio
get a better country
@carrotop
:p
I wouldn't have noticed most if you hadn't asked if there were any mistakes myself. Either way, don't change what you guys are doing. This is an excellent series. Nobody cares about menial punctuation mistakes unless it mangles the dialogue, which, of course, yours did not. Keep up the good work ;)
@large debo
Ha! After the crappy Christmas I had, you just made my day.
Well I'm glad. thanks for the new chapter as well
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